A Brokenness Inside Comments

Life is so lonely for every one on earth....but loneliness isn't something to be shunned or afraid of; it's rather a possible catalylist for a more purposeful and engaging life and an avenue for heightened self-awareness and maturity, thing that i see in your poem: We try to fill our time, and you fill your time writing poems full of maturity, goodness, reality, current problems, succeeeding thus to play the modern tune over the keyboard of tradition. Lastly, solitude is delicious in the years of maturity, giving you a lot of possibilities, isn't it? , A great write!

Everybody on earth has to face this gaping hole in some way or other. Very truly we are forced to live with it but can never be healed as some poeople think...... very well depicted fact.

Very good thoughts well expressed here. Read mine - Everybody Has Had Somebody - Adeline

Sadly most of us experience brokenness in one form or another. Another great write well done

What I believe gets broken is the ability to leap fearlessly as we once did when we were young. In that turning finding different ways to love...as Ghandi put it.....Be the change you want to see in the world. No reason one loss can't inspire another's gain.