Friday, February 19, 2010

A Broken World Needs Unity Comments

Rating: 5.0

A broken world needs unity
And it does not need mutiny.
Because a world pieced together
Make good moments last forever.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Marvin Brato 10 January 2014

Insightful poem....if only unity is possible to attain then this broken world can be mend!

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Jc Lunaria 30 June 2010

well written.. truly a broken world can only be fixed by unity. i wonder when will it happen. .obed. yep i am part of sama ka org. (=

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I also liked this very much, received with thanks and deep appreciation.

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Supriya Prathapan 24 March 2010

This is the need of the hour. All human beings should come together as one to save the world from further destruction.10++

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 27 February 2010

Bravo Obed! I liked this one. we are the World, if each one betters himself the world would be more united than ever...

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Fleance Candide 21 February 2010

smart personification. could be called cheesy but effectively so.

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