Thursday, November 1, 2018

A Broken Soul Comments

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A contrite heart
eaten as meal by the Wolf of anguish
polluted with bite of dishonour
and left to die in silence
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Miracle Asuquo
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 November 2018

contrite heart. anguish, dishonour, silence, the wounded soul, slavery, brutality, island odf doom. African dynasty., ., ., ., ., a poignant poem full of thoughts that reveal the slavery that comes down to fit into the rules and regulations and customs of a dynaysty........ thank u dear poet. such social injustices we as poets should bring to the world. thank u. tony

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Chinedu Dike 01 November 2018

Good rendition of words elegantly brought forth in persuasive poetic expressions with insight. Thanks for sharing Miracle.

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Dave Walker 01 November 2018

There is always a way out, you just have to find it to lift the sadness. A great poem.

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