Tuesday, March 2, 2010

A Broken Soul Comments

Rating: 4.8

In this shadow, dark and cold.
I feel you slowly leave my soul.
Now all I get inside is mourn.
My heart is grieving for your soul.
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Jessica Vera
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Michelle Valdez 02 March 2010

This poem reminds me of all the pain im going thru right now. And it just hurts to read it. But it helps to see to leave and be happy.

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Kranthi Pothineni 02 March 2010

Very well captures the pain of a broken person. Sad to read. But pain is a good teacher of life. Expressive and moving.

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Jessica Vera

Jessica Vera

Arecibo, PR
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