A Broken, Pained Heart. Comments

Poor, poor heart, poured away. Rachel Ann Butler

this is a very beautiful poem. the words you used are so precise and nice. thank you for sharing this

The lament is so engrossing. Good write.

Brilliant write Michael, poor pained heart, 10 Lynda xx

This is not just a pained, but it is a tortured heart. GW62

a beautiful string of couplets...! ! ! : D

This ones a sad poem of couplets, which needs some rural air to rejuvenate its soul. Nice one Michael