Our love was destined to fail,
I tried to save it without avail,
For between us, you built a fence,
Leaving me weak without any defense...
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Now, I stand on a solid ground, hoping for a real love to be found. Looing toward the future.
i can see your words , your poem made me think of my first date, , , , , it did not go well...10
I must say, this masterpiece left me speechless. So beautiful, and out of mind thinking.
a sweet filled with soul You turned my heart into a fortress Inhabited by a soul sad and hopeless But time has will do the healing, Making me self-confident with new feelings...
This poem is really a fantastic work of art. The faith in the One above is heling us really through all difficulties. I like very much the verses where you become stronger and the winner and the other one the loser. Very well written.10+
There is a fine unity of thought, skill and attitude surrounding life. I love the optimism and problem solving approach reflected in the poem. Marks 10
Wow! ! What a fantastic write....an emotional love poem which shows the defeat in love is not the end of world but you have to come out stronger as someone somewhere awaits you....
what a glorious poem to make people hope for a better day and love :) so glad that i finally read this superb poem... i really needed it :) One day Father will come and do the same thing he did for but for me peace and love Romeo ~Bella
Wonderful poem with a wonderful rhyming scheme. Just like all your other poems it is miserable but ends up hopeful at the end, I adore it. Keep spirits up Romeo!
A lovely poem with with emotions & heart break but with a message that true love makes a person more and more strong... loved it