A Broken Life Comments

Pains in our life sometime play great role in our life to open new sweet door dear friend! well penned indeed! 10+

WOW! ! ! ! very very nice. the last 8 lines did it 4 me. even though it was a great piece top to bottom i loved the way you ended. very nice work. i cant wait to read more

Sweet I liked the flow of this poem keep writing my friend 10s

I loved it as always!

The grass is always greener on the other side ;)