Saturday, January 14, 2006

A Broken Heart! Comments

Rating: 4.4

Memories are fleeting all through the night...
Heart beating fastly t'wards future's near
plight.
...
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Michael Gale
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Duncan Wyllie 11 November 2008

Beautiful * Well Worth Reading Love duncan X

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Michael Fischer 24 March 2007

Nicely done. You definitely have a knack for writing. Keep it up! -Michael

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Rene Bennett 02 March 2007

WOW! ! Excellent! Beautiful! ! Your words flow like a fine brandy! I can't wait to read more of your work. Rene'

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John Tiong Chunghoo 02 February 2007

yes, the candle is lit by the hope of one heart. very effective. intelligent write.

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Melvina Germain 01 September 2006

Heartfelt, I enjoyed this poem very much--Thankyou--Melvina

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Christian Eliab Ratnam 05 August 2006

Beautiful write! I enjoyed it very much! ! !

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MOVING PIECE, MIKE...YOU SPIN THE PISTURES LIKE A KALEIDOSCOPE STRONG CLOSE, , , BTW...WHY DON'T YOU USE YOUR MIDDLE NAME.... SOUNDS VERY LITERARYESQUE....YOUR NAME... YOUR CALL SMOOTH WRITE...'''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Tracey Collins 05 May 2006

Nice rite about A broken heart, I don`t like broken hearts, I like happy hearts instead LOL LOL LOL. I have A happy heart with Geoff right now.

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Patricia Gale 20 April 2006

Hope in a peaceful write. Patricia Gale

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Duncan Wyllie 19 February 2006

Such hope in this one and the words flow like a calm river.Thankyou for sharing your art.Love Duncan

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kskdnj sajn 14 January 2006

This is a great poem on love and loss Michael, and welcome to poem-hunter. I look forward to reading more of your work. Angie

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

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