Memories are fleeting all through the night...
Heart beating fastly t'wards future's near
plight.
...
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Nicely done. You definitely have a knack for writing. Keep it up! -Michael
WOW! ! Excellent! Beautiful! ! Your words flow like a fine brandy! I can't wait to read more of your work. Rene'
yes, the candle is lit by the hope of one heart. very effective. intelligent write.
Heartfelt, I enjoyed this poem very much--Thankyou--Melvina
MOVING PIECE, MIKE...YOU SPIN THE PISTURES LIKE A KALEIDOSCOPE STRONG CLOSE, , , BTW...WHY DON'T YOU USE YOUR MIDDLE NAME.... SOUNDS VERY LITERARYESQUE....YOUR NAME... YOUR CALL SMOOTH WRITE...'''''''''''''''''FRANK
Nice rite about A broken heart, I don`t like broken hearts, I like happy hearts instead LOL LOL LOL. I have A happy heart with Geoff right now.
Such hope in this one and the words flow like a calm river.Thankyou for sharing your art.Love Duncan
This is a great poem on love and loss Michael, and welcome to poem-hunter. I look forward to reading more of your work. Angie
Beautiful * Well Worth Reading Love duncan X