A Broken Heart Within Comments

I, too, have been the victim of a broken heart. Nice poem. I have five poems, but they are not activated yet. Why does it take so long for a new poet? Some of them were posted three days ago!

Broken heart explains its state of affairs. Beautiful poem.

A broken heart within me knows, What loneliness is... When it is left to linger, And slowly grows to wither in wishes! experience of loneliness is very painful. it breaks the heart....... loss of wishes and despair rules the heart.. painfullll. very nice poem full of living emotions. tony

Full of feelings and loaded with lonliness. Well done my friend!

The loneliness within is the poet's chief source of Muse. You have fully exploited this facility. Thanks for this orgasmic write.

It kills me to read this because it feels as if what my heart felt has been written out by someone I barely even know.

Interiorization of emotion! But Hope is healer Despair is killer. Despair poetically nicely chiseled. Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Please read my Poems: Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] Enigmatic Navel or others. niv

A poem with such depth of feeling, , Hope good things come to you Lawrence Take care Love duncan

Time gone, Like the wind blows, Never returns again! Not to visit in inquisitive sits... With the one excited to be near In benefitted moments held dear. ....wonderful true words from heart....great

This poem is just so sincere and poignant.You build lines so skillfully and fill them with expressions that make others really Feel. Best wishes. A.

A really fine description of loss. A wonderful poem, a poem I can feel. Ron

wow! ! ! ! ! ! a masterpiece crafted so patiently in your loneliness with so much loveliness -10 anju

a gem of masterpiece, sensitively woven with your mind's quill diffusing an evanescent feel

This is quite a thought provoking and moving poem, Lawrence, and I especially liked the repetition of some of the verses in it. I have always believed that repetition of lines or verses often enhances the impact of a poem on a reader, and this fine poem certainly makes an impact on it's readers. Carl.

It is a master piece

fine poem..................

Lawrence my friend, You have written the most wonderful dedication to a love never-ending story, expertly written..*10*10*10* All the best Jon

This poem speaks volumes, and I for one can really relate to this. I was widowed five years ago, and I think it just about sums me up. Thank you for sharing it. Sue x

top marks again, what a way with words, brilliant read.

i love and hate this poem...beautifully written...but my heart aches to read these words that expressed my emotions...the truth that deeply cuts my soul.