Wednesday, November 11, 2015

A Broken Heart Thief Comments

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Yes, I am a broken heart,
I don't know how I'm still beating!
From you I learned a wonderful art,
you taught me this beautiful cheating!
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Bipasha D 15 June 2018

I can relate to these situations...

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 24 February 2016

Jawad sahib! You do have your own way with your words and a love for poems. A lovely poem and thought provoking one.

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Heartfelt poem.........Nicely written Janab.

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Loke Kok Yee 12 November 2015

we are all playing that part in our own ways thank you-10

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Kelly Kurt 11 November 2015

A relatable poem, Akhtar. Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 November 2015

There is different sequence in broken heart. Sometimes this sequence is wisely expressed. The art of learning to breath is fantastic definitely with nice belief. Wonderfully drafted and shared poem definitely. Nice sharing.10

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