Thursday, November 6, 2008

A Broken Heart Can Never Mend Comments

Rating: 5.0

I thought it would be an exciting day
The best one of my life
But then it all turned towards the worst
I thought it was all a lie
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Kristin Bloyd
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Tia Maria 06 November 2008

My heart ached so much reading this & for some reason I was lead to look up 'broken' in the dictionary... of all the words, these stood out... 'interrupted; disturbed'... And then I hear a Celine song (oh no!) 'The heart does go on'... In time... ;) 10/10 for so stirring up a reader with your poetry!

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