Monday, October 7, 2013

A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

A heart is as fragile as glass
A single blow can make it shatter
The heart then screams in pain
The sorrow makes it sadder
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Wallis minten
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Raymond Magabe 26 March 2014

not too concise but real enough to truly portray the heart. word

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Piyush Dey 07 October 2013

I really enjoyed the essence of the poem. Beautiful write.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 October 2013

broken heart, good write, thanks.

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