Thursday, December 6, 2012

A Broken Heart Comments

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A cheerful heart, what happen to it?
Does it break like a glass or does it cut off like a tree,
Does it smell like a rotten egg or does it fall like the snow.
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Blessing Anastasia Abaka
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

Why does everyone please themselves before others, Why do they insult those who are cheerful. To me they are wicked and selfish They have eaten up their emotion of love. love, hatred, jealousy, egoism, selfishness. all these points come in this poem and is expressed. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Matthias Pantaleon 12 October 2015

Heartfelt piece. Lucidly told.... But I was thinking maybe you should check line 3 of stanza 3. Do u mean CRY or CREY? ...beautiful poem.

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Bob Brown 30 December 2012

Splendid imagery.., . I loved this.

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Onyeme John 20 December 2012

Glassy Hearts... broken by stony hearts. Hearts that do not know the delicacy of human emotion. We hope the glassy hearts do not fall in the web of stony hearts, innocently. Nice poem Ana

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 December 2012

beautiful imagery... about broken heart..ilke the line They have eaten up their emotion of love very poeic.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 December 2012

the imagery is beautiful.. induldge and heart glee... the line They have eaten up their emotion of love... very poetic..

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Jahan Zeb 07 December 2012

Because success need no appreciation. The successful ideas are already on the high. The broken heart need healing and it is more human to have sympathy for them. Cheerful hearts have many to accompany but broken are alone and in danger of worse condition. That is why I feel. We do not condemn cheerful hearts actually the broken heart is discussed more. A nice poem though and an interesting question too. Well Done

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Hazel Durham 07 December 2012

A very interesting poem about a broken heart and asking the question why some people resent a cheerful heart. Great write!

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Asif Andalib 07 December 2012

Lovely write. I liked it

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Babatunde Aremu 06 December 2012

They have eaten up their emotion indeed. Great imagery and good poem. Keep writing.

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Suzaku Vaneko 06 December 2012

Wow! You're an amazing poet. This poem is beautiful, I love it!

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Blessing Anastasia Abaka

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