Tuesday, July 12, 2011

A Broken Heart Comments

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Life is a battle, however hard fought, to be lost..
In the end all we gain is a pained and empty heart,
devoid of any feelings.
For long lost will be the joy over small things, the silent pain and the warmth of love..
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Jazib Kamalvi 23 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Revathy. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 July 2011

unfortunately there is no alternative.better fight and die.nice words.liked it.

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Empty soul 12 July 2011

really good liked the words you used and the emotions :) carry on! !

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