A Broken Heart Comments

Heartbreakingly beautiful...with the colorful hues of your words, my mind's eye gets the picture....well done...

a good poem. keep the faith.

Hello Juan, How can you mend a broken heart? A real heart touching poem. Appreciate the write. I invite you to read my collection of poems and comment if you like.

It is a very fine art by you that expresses your sorrow along with revealing your faith in a handsome style. The language is simple and lines are delicious because of rhymes.

There is a place somewhere for everyone be it desert or the mountains for a broken heart to rest...nice poem of feelings to read...regards

very beautiful lines sir.... I like ur poems very much.....

i like the torn part of this poem, because you see, when we fall in love unexpectedly to a new place we hurt when we leave though we know that where we are bound to is our home.

Hi Juan, Such a lovely poem, but only you can write the last line.search in your heart and i'm sure you will find it. Best wishes Wendy x x

Amazing faith is shown between the lines. This is a true poem having a lot of depth and wisdom. Nice and incredible write.

I know with this kind of faith that someday you shall return. Again I am glad you invited me to read your work, it is good and I really enjoy reading it. Thanks, Lynn