Thursday, March 25, 2010

A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.1

he's watching me, silently,
hoping that I won't see.
his blue eyes glaring,
his mouth slowly curving.
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chidiebere franklin
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Maria Shipka 24 June 2010

Oh! To whom have you broken a heart Franklin? ? ? To your father...grandfather...friend? ? ? How could you hart somebody by writing poem? ? ? If I would be your grandmother I would be on you very proud!

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Dear muse, unusually moralistic.Congrgtulations.

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 08 May 2010

Just starting to read your poems and you are very good and have lots to read on.

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