Tuesday, September 15, 2009

A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 3.4

will i suffer my whole life,
coz your face is in the dark?
the laughter i once knew
only taunts me in my dreams,
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Saane Pahulu
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Nathan Barkley 08 November 2009

'ashamed that your gone, i wonder the alone in the maze of my heart searching for the love you placed within these walls...' those lines was sooooo epic! loved the poem

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Adam Pinheiro 18 September 2009

i like this poem ALOT. kinda gave me the impression of a pair of friends who grew apart, but as the poem unrolled itself to me, i could see a more emotional background behind it. very compassionate, u mustve been close: ]. u dont really state anywhere, but it sounds like hes passed away? if so, may he RIP.

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