A Broken Heart Comments

nice anaphora '' a broken heart'' wonderful poem............10

love comes love goes through every single one it flows is it good or is it bad but in the end someone is always left sad Great poem short but makes sense great work

Hiya Tim, Short, sharp and to the point quite literally - well done!

Some very vivid imagery in so very few words. Repetition is used effectively and adds to the impact. A powerful piece of poetry - excellent stuff! S :)