Thursday, April 23, 2009

A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was so happy, sorrow had yet to come my way.
Your smile was so rich just like a sunlit bay.
You were always around when I needed you,
Just like every flower needs dew.
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Runita R Menezes
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Nick Smith 06 May 2009

very well done... sry u got hurt

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Kesav Easwaran 03 May 2009

love often breaks a few hearts...mends few others good write expressive although sad...10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 May 2009

Just like every flower needs dew......................oh what imagery of love, just starry night needs moon, love seems to shadowed by the storm, that may glean tears to eyes, but in time and space that happens to happen by its own way in matrix of love, that is the other side of love when intense, wrought ingenious by eloquence of passion,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Anjali Sinha 28 April 2009

hey dear Runita dont be so broken hearted theres lots of fish in the pond perhaps he was never the one destined for you-- so forget him if hes found another bee and not been faithful to you whatever a lovely poem -10 anjali

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