Saturday, September 30, 2006

A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

Many parts to my broken heart,
from the day when it fell apart.
My whole world came crashing down,
but its fell with out a sound.
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Cheneth Jane San Diego 27 June 2008

Well written... Another painful experience I guess...

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Claire Jones 26 February 2007

Another beautifully expressed poem! CJ.xx.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 01 October 2006

Most excellent structure and wonderful presentation, even if it is a sad topic!

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