Monday, September 15, 2008

A Broken Heart Comments

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All the words you said to me,
That seemed to be so true.
Were nothing but thoughtless lies,
That I thought would never come from you.
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iL.Hazen.Winckler.
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Winnie Angel 27 November 2008

Hey Sara a true poem abt games that ppl play abt and around us in both gender it has become a common thing to do.. love for the sake of fun. Too diifficult to find true love.... Love Winnie

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Silence Dogood 15 September 2008

I think the stanzas three four and eight are the best the others could be improved on but overall I really enjoyed it

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Yankton, South Dakota
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