A Broken Heart Comments

life there is meeting of love but by the course of time everyone chooses own path oh then begins the time of pain in heart......

Different ends meet the boundaries amazingly and we notice these. But still you are asking to stay beside heart. This poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.10

Life may be a circle when we come to its end, we might be surprised to know that it's another start.

End we feel is not the end... its just the begining... very nice thought! ! !

when one thing ends something else is about to begin dear friend. look to the future. lovely

This poem is very heart warming.

Delightful read, Romeo. You are here actiing like the real Romeo, in love and hurt and still willing to love.

Romeo, this so beautifully written and your words had the power to make me feel your pain.

Beautiful...lovely poem... :)

the end is the beginning a philosophical line.........very inspirational...................

nice poem...i love it so much sorry for the broken heart

Lovely work! Beautiful flow :)

you have made a real thing concrete in your words...this is an excellent write. i admire this peotry.

This a very good poem I loved the way it flowed, and spoke right to you

This is a great poem with good flow i liked it. Well done

Sorry for the broken heart. Writing diminish the pain. This love desire is not worth your heart. Keep searching...One day you'll find a paire of shoes that is right for your feet (a French saying) . The world is wide and humankind's openess is unendless....Love your poems, I shared 2 for the moment, but I have to read all of yours. Thanks for sharing and please continue to write, Romeo....Virginia

'A boundary is broken Overstepped and outreached' RAB

Deep and intense; I love the first stanza as it paints the rawness of reality, regarding the inevitable moments of breakup. Great work!

this was a good poem. i really enjoyed this 1 <3

WOW! I really like this one. It's so nice to see such great talent. I have goosebumps reading this. My comments aren't as elated as yours but this is a great piece. =) Tina