A Broken Heart Comments
Comes too late to conquer my ambitions
Comes too late to stage my play
All that I've written is lost and gone
My memory is at a distance
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A broken heart is very near and dear to God. Best Wishes. Naseer
This is a filled with alot of sadness, however a broken heart sometimes is one of Gods worst emotional roller coaster rides, we most, indure... Remember life will go on and somehow, someway try to develope a positive in your soal, it is painfull, but things happen for a reason, sometimes the worst of reasons, and always we may never know the answer immediatly, but as life travels us through many roads, one day, it will hit you as to why this happened.... Remember too, no one can take your memories even if they are from a broken heart.... Sweet write and enjoyed this much.. Bonnie
very heart touching poem, which goes deep down to heart to those who have broken hearts. This must be from personal experience, i just guess. Best
'My memory is at a distance Is all that I've forgotten'... good expressive write...the line quoted above is colorful poetic...10
It really touched my heart and it hurts to now that you have suffered a lot in you life.......it really brought tears to my eyes...and an easy 10 for it
In this poem 'My life is near a bin' touches much. My 10 with it.
A broken heart... never unwanted but often undaunted... One can only wish to ellude them... but we all know that there's never really a happily ever after to that kind of wish... Masterfully written Suzan, a **10** from beginning to end. Be Well
This poem is nice and talks about hope which sometimes seems to fade in us all.
How insightful. A precious look into a sorrowful soul. Very well written.
The more I read this poem the more I kept finding myself hidden in it. Thanks for expressing pain the way it should, nice work!
To the persona of this expressive confessional poem I share this comment by a TV character: 'When the heart is broken, the heart is open.'
Unfortunately we all must suffer from a broken heart sometime in our life. I say the sooner the better, because what we learn will help us down the road of life
Suzan a nice poem. Life keeps throwing stuffs at us n at a particular stage we dont feel lost anymore. This particular point i feel is wen we wind our life. The last line appears to be a punch line.. Too good.. wishes, Deepa
Hi Suzan, First of all, this is a wonderful poem. Second of all - what a burden to carry. Maybe you feel, or it seemed you were trying to express that you feel, regret along with the hopelessness over the pain you're going through (is this a recent poem/situation - or a reality-based one?) . Maybe just take some steps to make it up to yourself. The biggest, and biggest self-esteem boosting step, to overcoming regret, is just to stop the behavior. Actually, that's often all that's required, and then maybe share with someone about it that you know will not judge you. The pain does stop - there is always a cause; contemplate what the cause is and reverse it. take care, Marc
The angst, pain and lament of a heart broken is very rarely a forever event....Life really does go on, and if trated as such, usually, Love's renaissance is not too far down the road...Excellentdepiction...pristinely structured.Fine work, young lady. I picked a good day to visit...i found you! f
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A well crafted and poignant write! 10+++ Keep it up, you got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! I hope you have the time to read my poem also titled: A BROKEN HEART and enjoy it! Love and Peace for always! ...