A Broken Friendship Comments

You out of my life was definitely a good thing I felt like I was committed to being your friend The only difference is there was no ring I feel like you and I were just always on a different page...oh so bitter cross overand desertation...but is not the hard aspect of life...it brings lot of pain and misery in life..i loved the way u put in....10 miss i miss u......divorce...no separate ways......anywhere

'...you and I were just always on a different page And every time I tried to go to the next chapter You were holding me back and yet I stayed'... nice lines there... explain very eloquently why and how the relation broke...frank and expressive write Shilesha...well written piece...10

ALWAYS acting like you were on your menstrual........ haha...lol i fear if u two ever were friends....even before u had not broken that relationship good work though

Very good theme and expression. But read repeatedly and edit. All great poets use to edit for several times before going for publication.