A Broken Doll Comments

This is an absolute gem........thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

A very perceptive write woven and delivered by a great thinker and Poet. Wonderfully conveyed.

A heart touching sort of poem. Thanks for sharing.

By examining this doll, an archaeologist of souls excavates a time of pure affection.

Thought of the poet clearly goes step by step in this poem. Appropriate Words is used in all sentence. The poem mainly keeps focus on thought. overall it was eexcellent. love u poet.

Such a fantastic write........Thank u, dear poet.anjandev Roy.

Powerful written and heart moving! .. Thank you for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ......................+++++

This is an elegant piece of poetry with tender poetic expression! My great pleasure revisiting this lovely poem!

Revisiting this wonderful poem. A meaningful well crafted write.

A beautifully expressed pain, very revealing line in parenthesis.

when something is broken and repaired it is never the same Akhtar. Enjoyed reading your poem thank you Alan

There are things that can be mended and others are beyond repair. A broken doll can be repaired but it cannot be restored to its original beauty. There will always be spots that will give way to the damage. A wonderful poem beautifully crafted. Very touching write with an important message.

Once the heart is broken, well it can be mended but a crack remains there forever! Your ‘broken doll’ is a fabulous creation carrying pragmatic expression, a beautiful piece of work! ! Thanks a lot dear sir for sharing…10

Such a touching poem...............................................................................

Akhtar, i read this again and think i understand it well now. very nice. i shall place this into my/our March 2017 showcase. Thanks. bri :)

i appreciate the Poet's Notes though i don't agree it is always true. bri :)

Shall I succeed in joining the pieces, ..............at the end of the poem i understood what this line meant, more or less. you would connect the pieces. at first i thought you wondered if you too should be broken......by yourself or another. (Being misbehaved by my sweetest child) ...............this i still do not understand. hmm? i find this poem to be (for me) bizarre, but entertaining and well-written. i suppose it is symbolic of something and you did not really have a 'doll' in your heart! bri :) to MyPoemList

A broken doll, an small poem, but big imagination. Thank you for sharing.

Narcissistic do guide but with sincerity sir you are a light a beacon of poetry X and Y genes produce a male XX a female We all share 96 percent of apes' ask them when will they share the rest? I took some time off child as you called me granny @90 no wonder ego in you is also, if not worse than mine between'''' lose and loose'''... do define.....google, if need be I have seen all the guys only praise... so that one day they may also raise... what? I leave it to your flourishing and ripe imagination you are a 100 marks poet... I ain’t. But what made you read my poetry(s) is quite quaint!

comment on herz do guide but with sincerity sir you are a light a beacon of poetry X and Y genes produce a male XX a female We all share 96 percent of apes' ask them when will they share the rest? I took some time off child as you called me granny @90 no wonder ego in you is also, if not worse than mine between'''' lose and loose'''... do define.....google, if need be I have seen all the guys only praise... so that one day they may also raise... what? I leave it to your flourishing and ripe imagination you are a 100 marks poet... I ain’t. But what made you read my poetry(s) is quite quaint!