A Broken Chain Comments
A dumb copy of me.
You were done for.
Sometimes the design goes awry.
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Bees ready to fly away! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Sometimes the design goes awry. Ptosis. You are called for― a fall. But you refuse to die. You survive the clouds, the first moon, the brown eyes. Me before the sun.- - - - - I can not say I fully understood the poem, still its beauty makes me come here again and again to read and enjoy.
A great poem indeed. Like to read again and again. Deserved to be poem of the day.
A great philosophical poem so nicely executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
A fabulous piece of work! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!
How truly lovely. Congratulations on Poem of the day and very well deserved I might add.
Heartiest Congratulations for selection of this beautifully conceived poem as Poem of the Day.
Satish, such a splendid poem of the day........... Congrats for being chosen...10++++++++++++
nice writing The shrine of a (intentional error) flier insurmountable thinking for poor hunger!
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Your words too are broken and heartfelt. You birthdate is a special one. Thank you