A Bright Tomorrow Comments

It is nicely prepared, fresh and good, ”No dear sir” I am very sorry, I earn sufficient and food is no worry,

I don’t know how to work for better tomorrow What are the rules that I have to follow? How the thing to be allowed and grow? .... nice to dream....10

Each moment a lifetime. A thoughtful poem.-Baru Gobira

don’t know how to work for better tomorrow What are the rules that I have to follow? How the thing to be allowed and grow? it has to be bright future....10

Sun was blazing all the way Striking heat waves with direct rays Forcing people to find shelter on the way but not letting any opportunity to pass or giving away I am very agree with what written in your poem. Sometimes reality of human atitude, action and reaction are actually chain of what been seen, learned and adopted thru sweet or bitter life experience. Well written and almast accurate with what actually happening to human nowdays. 10 for reality poem.

‘Life seems full of uncertainties/One has to remain contended with varieties’…Sir always you decor corpus of poetry with nuggets …some places I find diamonded nuggets …love it most much…quoted above… thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

That was really deep good job =) Hey can you or anyone else who reads this comment come read my poems I'm kinda new to this and would really enjoy what you think on them Thanks, Koby