Monday, July 14, 2008

A Bright Sunny Day Comments

Rating: 4.5

Please forgive me if this rhyme does not reason
Then it could just be I am suffering because of this
rainy season. I often wonder why the sun has lost it's
shine, maybe it was like that way back in time.
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Greenwolfe 1962 14 July 2008

I could recommend this poem because there is nothing stylistically wrong with it, but I'm not going to because I see no value in this piece. That is a very critical and odd thing to say, but it is genuinely what I felt as I read it. It was all about the weather. The weather, may be the opposite of poetry. Poets take all elements in the weather and try to make something other than the weather of them. Historically speaking, this may be the first non-poem ever written to be such. GW62

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Sandra Fowler 14 July 2008

Lovely to see one of your fine lyric poems again. Wishing you the sunny day that you deserve. Warmest regards, Sandra

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