A Bright Spring Morning Comments
Out of the dark, a lambent, lovely day has dawned
In silvery brilliance the early morning is drowned
In the sapphire sky, the sun has appeared on his diurnal shift
Over the firmament the vagrant clouds aimlessly drift
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Congrats, Valsa; this is a lovely poem! I cannot log in to PH today for some reason. When I click the 'sign in' button nothing happens!
Heartiest Congratulations, once again, dear Valsa. The spring looks bright, beautiful and inspiring through your lovely.
Happy to see Valsa's poem as the modern poem of the day. I have read, commented and rated this poem earlier.
2) Congratulations being honoured with The Modern Poem Of The Day, Valsa! Most deserving.
1) At the sight of what spring has brought, our hearts will automatically cry out for joy, great exciting poem that deserves 5 Stars, and what a poem! Awesome read!
Pigeons nestle with their fledglings and bright sunshine and new blooming motivate mind. We feel Spring Time's pristine beauty. We feel natural love. God has brought up such season for us. Spring morning is very special. This poem has a rich imagery. I feel happy reading this...10
some nice rhyming and word-images here! some favorite lines: " Pigeons nestle with their fledglings in the eaves Bright sunshine seeps down through the leaves" ..... but on the next line i SUGGEST " ..take wing..." , not 'take wings', and not 'take on wings'. :) to MyPoemList bri ;)
Beautiful poem Valsa. Spring has this flamboyant effect on us. Your poem expressed it all. Enjoyed reading it and loved the picture.
Within me, all of a sudden, I sense a divine elation Erasing from my sullen soul, all traces of vexation Through every fibre of my being, the waves of joy rise And my spirit leaps out in ecstasy to the skies! JUSSSTTTT SOOOO BEEEEAAAAUUUUTTTTEE FFFFUUUUUUULLLLLLLLLL MA'AM VG
Thank you dear poet friend for this deep appreciation over my poem! I feel so happy you enjoyed it!
Your loveliest spring poem has helped you to SPRING OVER SO MANY LEADING now ur in popularity well done VS Long tyme no sea okay C
Superb poem well supported by lush green floral picture. Spring is back with boom.... It seems Heaven has flung all its treasures down And the Earth appears regally decked in floral crown
Yes, spring is back with a boom and our Mother Earth is once more dressed up as a beautiful bride! Thanks a lot Asim!
The presence of Spring! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Nothing is more impressive than nature - the spring so full of beautiful flowers. Classic nature poem so beautifully written. Thank you Valsa......A full score 10
Nature is the best friend of poets! I know that you too derive a lot of inspiration from Nature. Thanks a lot Geeta for your lovely comment!
I loved this poem. The description was perfect and wonderful.
Thanks a lot dear poet friend for visiting my page and for the uplifting comment!
This is one of the best poems on spring i have read recently. The rhyming, the flow and weaving of words make it a very beautiful poem. 'Within me, all of a sudden, I sense a divine elation Erasing from my sullen soul, all traces of vexation Through every fibre of my being, the waves of joy rise And my spirit leaps out in ecstasy to the skies! '... is so nice. With such beauty around one would feel relaxed and refreshed. Great work.10++++++
Thank you Anil for your observations and lovely comment! I feel delighted!
Oh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! My spring starved heart yearns to be inside this gorgeous poem and walk under the flowering trees and see flowers unfurl from the soil. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! My soul sighs! I've got snow banks 4 feet deep- had them for months. I want to be inside your beautiful poem and never come out until that sun shines here. This poem deserves to be chosen poem of the day. 10++++++++++++++++++++++ and an esteemed place on my list of favs!
Even with the advent of spring in most part of the globe, I understand that winter still lingers in many places! This time winter has been unusually severe compared to the previous years.... we are made to worry more and more about global warming! Hope spring will soon come to your place with a burst of plants and blooms and the dull atmosphere will once more be resonant with bird songs! Susan, I am so delighted to get this lovely comment from you after a long gap! Thank you so much!
Pigeons nestle with their fledglings. Bright sunshine seeps down through the leaves and birds with due care take their morning flights. A lovely lament is witnessed with care and fortune. Spring's presence has mesmerized us and this has motivate mind. Wind has brought up forgotten melody. We hear every nice sequence of sweet tune. An interesting poem is excellently penned...10
Thank you Kumaramani sir for your lovely and encouraging comment....!
An excellent depiction of a spring morning...even I enjoy watching the sky a lot...a lovely poem that indeed invokes the pleasant morning impact in the reader's heart..." .my spirit leaps out in ecstasy to the skies! " ...very true 10++++...thank you Valsa for this great effort
Thanks a lot Indiraji! Enjoyed reading your comment! Also thanks for the high rating!
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7/23/2025 8:52:32 PM # 1.0.0
A beautiful poem well crafted and executed, Valsa, as always.