Friday, January 31, 2020

A Bright Day Comments

Rating: 4.6

It is a bright day
Lovely clouds drift into view
Forming the image
Of a beautiful Angel
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rob Lamberton 24 February 2023

There is much to be gained by looking up!

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Anjandev Roy 12 May 2021

Of a beautiful angel.......fantastic write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2020

A splendid little poem with fabulous imagery! Fascinating poetic expression......10++++++

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Susan Williams 21 March 2020

What a dreamy poem- it sails softly across the page like the clouds it writes about. I can read this and feel as contented as can be- - especially since an angel is drifting softly over me! onto fav list! ! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2020

This is true imaginable, a fascinating show high up in the sky, I love how angels look and move, hours go by sans knowing that. Talking about angels, this reminds me of my visit to the Sixtijn Chapel, how adorable are those angels in that fresco high up. A dashing beauty conjured by your golden pen and beautiful mind. A 10 Top score for the poem. This scene touched every reader's senses. True poetically presented, dear great poetess.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 March 2020

An Angel view. Beauty lies in the beholders' eyes. Goodness in their mind. Nice poetic expression 10+

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Akhtar Jawad 12 February 2020

The clouds are vagabonds and can acquire any shape but mother earth accepts all the shapes melted in the rains.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2020

Echoes of a new day! ! Musing along with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 February 2020

the image Of a beautiful Angel A splendid show in the sky. I too see very often angels in the sky . was it imagination, was it real? ? i dont know. but today when i read your poem i thought all that i see is real. tony

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Unwritten Soul 05 February 2020

Sound so positive and cheerful. So Rose, hope your days always like this...bright and beautiful to have. :)

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Sandra Feldman 04 February 2020

Most beautiful image. So sweetly and poetically expressed!

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Rosie Bourget 02 February 2020

One of the benefits of a bright day is that it boosts mood and concentration. Especially for those who have issues with depression and anxiety. Nicely done.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 February 2020

I love watching clouds changing forms in the sky....10+++

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Anjandev Roy 01 February 2020

drift into view....well written. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 February 2020

If the mind feels happy and peppy, everything looks good, also if nature perks up the mind, everything feels good, and it imagines all sorts of goodly things, this is what seems to have happened here, for the imagination has soared. The effect is lovely.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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