A Brief Time Comments

I like this poem. Well put. Bien!

Quite touching - amazingly well done!

Absolutely beautiful love it i have given it a ten

A short and sweet write Heather. Time well spent is better than time in years spent. Memories will linger on.

I am not sure up to what extent words are sweet but when u Use Heather, they taste better than cherries and berries.

The moments are so realistic in your artistic touch. Lovely verses.

the life is not measurable with numbers of quantity but with light quantized energy and emotion of in heart /great penned piece of art

The quality of time together is more important than the duration. Nicely expressed.

A beautiful tanka, even for a few seconds, briefest of time it can never be forgotten and it will always leave a lasting memory to someone so in love. A very lovely poem.

Very true, I can vouch for your words. A lovely write Heather.

A beautiful little poem, memories are what can keep us going.