! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Brief Respite- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

One sweltering day, Wind howls, trees fall; it rains White pellets- Hail, storm! awesome 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Love to hear raindrops and see hail pelting the windowglass. The drama is pleasing. If the storm is not too severe. Very vivid, Mamta. Warm regards, Sandra

storm of words spinning in haiku form..........10

Felt the 'Thirst' And the 'Drink' too. Cute and sweet.

Imaginative haiku piece, Mamta...thanks

I really like the extremes of heat and hail storm in this haiku. Very well chosen words to bring in powerful atmosphere. 10 Karin Anderson

A very meaningful haiku. Very well written, Mamta.

Neat weather haiku well written Mamta...10

J o o s h 10

a picture of the weather there