A Brief Pause On Earth Comments

Hello Smokey a beautiful poem and a tribute for Townes well written i love the last verse

our stay here is simply a brief pause in time. lovely write

Nice poem smoky. I like the similitude of Christ. Thanks. Mark Walters

Who knows for sure-perhaps this is just a stopover.You handled a delicate subject with grace and dignity

This blew me away, and the final lines cinched it. So lovely and dreamy..I like it much.

The last three lines make a fine short poem just by themselves! - I like the ideas you are sharing with us here.

One of the fine poems is this, , , really enjoyed your poem...let's hope to meet at the other shore..

Now this is poetry Smoky. I enjoy reading this one a lot. You certainly demonstrate the power and the depth inside that poet heart of yours with this beauty. I must get over here far more often.... You are on my favorites list for sure. Jim Troy

amen brother... he waits for you on the other shore!