Saturday, June 28, 2014

A Brief Moment Comments

Rating: 4.6

Life's just
A brief moment
There's no time
To do all
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Ramesh Rai 09 October 2014

Life is a moment and we have to catch everything within this short moment.

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Nice poem. My favorite lines were the last two: An instant, In time.

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Heather Wilkins 02 July 2014

life is like a brief moment. the yr=ears hasten by. there will never be enough time to do everything we wish to do. excellent writing

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Valsa George 30 June 2014

When we have no eyes to see the beauty around, how can we hope to travel round the globe to catch a glimpse of all these great marvels of man and Nature! For a man of mind and means, it would indeed be a rewarding experience! Enjoyed!

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* Sunprincess * 28 June 2014

.......................life is definitely a mystery.....why is life so short.....and why does life not give us enough time to do all of these things..... and enough time for us to buy an island in the pacific....

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