Monday, April 14, 2008

A Brief Introduction To My Thoughts (I'M Smiling, Darling, Not Whining) Comments

Rating: 4.0

Hi. The name is Lou.
Born in the land of the new moon,
raised in the Pearl of the Orient.
My Grandparents as my Parents,
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Douglas Scotney 23 November 2015

I see me in some of thee, Lou Embalsado.

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Paul Amrod 23 November 2015

Hi Lou, I feel your blues. I am a Lebanese American. I wish all the best and thank you for your heartfelt poem, Salaam Paul

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Bharati Nayak 23 November 2015

Your poem bring cheers.- - - - - - - - - Hope you will bring more smile and cheers through your poems.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 23 November 2015

Good speed to expose true spirit. Thanks.

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 November 2015

Such a beautiful poem. Thanks for sweet introduction.

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Souren Mondal 23 November 2015

'I am the assistant of the Vice Mayor of Looserville, The servant of lovers, the lover of servants. My Lips are ready, and steady, my forehead is sweating, My eyes are red and crying.' Yes, sometimes many of us actually feel the Mayor and the President of Looserville... Well penned poem that talks about teenage crisis.. We had all been there.. Thanks..

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Jasbir Chatterjee 23 November 2015

congrats on being poet of the day today!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 23 November 2015

Hi Lou, good to know you. Of course, this is not going to be our last conversation.

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Souren Mondal 23 November 2015

Unfortunately it might just be Jasbir. The last time Lou submited a poem the year was 2009, the month January, and the day was 23rd of the month...

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angelianne 1012 18 June 2008

very interesting indeed (you and this poem) ..this is very nice..well done lou..another *10 for u...=)

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Estrella Baldemosa 14 June 2008

you're good...i'll be reading more of your poems

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Little Mo 06 June 2008

Well nice to make your aquaintance Lou. Thats quite a room you have there! rich in inspiration. Loved the face pace of this very enlightening piece.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 April 2008

hey bro...........with this kinda write........you don't need an intoduction.......you amazed me.........keep going bro

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brenda bassen 14 April 2008

You know where to find me... my poet friend! I'll see you there... ;)

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