A Brief History Of Man Kind Comments

Yes! A poet who is not afraid to play with words, to use them and abuse them and twist them around. Neither are you afraid to make them stutter, drag them out, shout in rage, use sigh (sign) language. Excellent hints of times long ago- - -a bridge over turbulent waters who's troubled Today- - -, Cl - ar- ic- e, what did you see- - .sinned like all the President's men- -etc. Absolutely stunning- do not back down from this style. It has power. It takes a serious reader but then again you have serious things to say. On the other hand, I notice you use other styles as well- don't abandon them either. Some topics call out for different handling- -you certainly chose the right one for this poem. Am awed by your poem. I have similar style in portions of my prose writing when events are slamming into a character and in several poems I have written in the past so I have a passion for playing with words and styles and structure so I am keeping an eye on you and your fascinating work. At least a 10. .