Saturday, January 14, 2006

A Bridge To Your Precipice Comments

Rating: 5.0

night envelopes my pain and sorrow.
moon's light fails to reach even this place
there is no reprieve
in this vacuum
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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" I'll believe less and less in mercy, compassion and hope." Marvellous, albeit poignant

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Brian Dorn 11 December 2006

Solemn stuff, Eila... sad but so well written! Brian

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Joe Breunig 06 August 2006

I felt the sadness ooze from these words; a nicely written piece.

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Peter Lebuhn 11 February 2006

I like this one very heart felt Wanting something but cannot be This happens so much in life I have one Dark Clouds...Heavy With Rain It is a Painful Rendition of a relationship gone bad Peter

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Gina Onyemaechi 14 January 2006

A bridge in order to reach a precipice: the feeling of utter hopelessness is embodied in this paradoxic image.

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