Tuesday, August 21, 2018

A Bridge On A Dry River (Inspired By "A Bridge", Poem By Wieslaw Musialowski) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bridge always invites to move on the other bank of a river,
Sometimes by the aggressive armies for capturing a piece of land,
Sometime to kiss the awaiting beloved on the other side,
A lover I am and I love to give my hand in her hand.
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Huma Mir 11 March 2019

Beautiful poem indeed. thought provoking

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 August 2018

A great and thought provoking poem. Very insightful write. I agree with the Poet that by changing the course of the river, consequently turning it into a dry river, it has destroyed the natural. line of defense. Liked the.last stanza. Very romantic.10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 August 2018

Alas! This was the bridge where I had once kissed my sweet heart, In my heart I don't have terror, I was a lover and I am a lover..........great romantic expression! The bridge is the eye witness! A beautiful poem....loved reading it....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2018

A bridge always invites to move on the other bank of a river, Sometimes by the aggressive armies for capturing a piece of land, Sometime to kiss the awaiting beloved on the other side, A lover I am and I love to give my hand in her hand......... nice beginning of the poem that says much on love and communication. A beautiful metaphorical poem nicely and touchingly executed.10

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Muzahidul Reza 21 August 2018

A bridge joins / intimates two regions for other to communicate, great write on this theme and here this bridge is concerned with your memory, fantastic write, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in poemhunter,10

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Seeing Eye 21 August 2018

You have one poem after another inspired by some other poet. This trend should be discontinued. Stand up and shout I am inspired by myself!

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Akhtar Jawad 22 August 2018

Beauty may be yours but the love that inspires belongs to me. Everything Is Mine, my new poem is a detailed reply.

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