Tuesday, July 14, 2015

A Bridge Not Crossed Comments

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This bridge uncrossed doesn't span a raging river or a gentle stream
but torrents of doubt whirlpools of fear, confidence swept away
like driftwood caught up in the force of the unknown, afraid now a
dream to claim
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Herbert Dry
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Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015

A very inspiring poem, very impressive how you have described the entire conundrum of fear of the unknown, and wanting the safety of the past. Building courage being the only way to cross the bridge into the future to realize your dreams at last. Loved the imagery of feelings and emotions, very detailed and intense. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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