A Bridge Is Required Comments

You have brilliantly depicted the truth..life and death! I identify the first four lines as the epitome of this beautiful piece of work! Yes, I absolutely agree with you that love and togetherness is the most key parameters required for leading a peaceful life! You have chosen the best title for the fabulous piece of poetry! I vote it with a 10

A refined poetic imagination, manaswini. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you

Such a great poem, Manaswini...10++++

You have expressed the span of life so beautifully... What actually matter is to pass it. for which a bridge is required. And there must be tireless effort to make this life worth living.. ....No excuse of tiredness will be entertained. Thee inevitability of death.. The meeting time is predetermined - date, hour, second And you end up the poem so elegantly with It may be of relation and trust or love and togetherness But it is a must Brilliantly written, a philosophical poem for all. Thanks Ma'am for the sharing. A huge 10 for it. Regards, Subhas

So we have to make a bridge to pass the path of life. It may be of relation and trust or love and togetherness But it is a must. Great philosophic thoughts nicely converted in an impressive poem.

Of course both birth and death are two eternal truths of the Universe. We all pass through these. There is a bridge between birth an death and that is life in appearance. We become eager in Earth for starting this great journey of our arrival. Having relationships and togetherness in society we live and move as per time. But still every one lives alone and pass this bridge as per his or her time. This poem is excellent and deeply philosophical.