A Bridge Across The Stars Comments
Two worlds, cruel fate, two worlds apart.
Don't cry my dear, when it gets dark
We'll build a bridge across the stars
To mountains, moons and golden hearts.
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a bridge through the stars! ! ! wonderful expression and a stunning poem....keep writing please!
nice surrealistic poem, thank you for sharing................10
you do have a way with words, i do have to admit though, i didn't really understand this one, you sould explain it sometime. all the same, good job
beautiful little write :) ....taken to the heart.....profound and lovely..... 10++: D
an optimistic bridge! see it through to the bitter end. keep bulding! never say die! you would reach it!
floyd your poem was beautiful. you were able to capture so much in so little words. i hope when you are finshed your bridge it leads you to your golden heart. i am sure it is waiting for you. Jen
Very nicely written about death..I gave you a ten..
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10/20/2025 5:02:43 AM # 1.0.0
I like it very much. Beautiful and clever text. (10v.) Greetings.Maria Barbara Korynt