I am living with smile
Along with lot of bail
And like a small child
In a world of care
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wish all your aims will come true....well expressed indeed..i like the flow of your words..very moving 10++
starting a dual life...transition to the latter stage will happen only slowly...meaningful write, Kranthi...10
Kranthi ur lines are melodious wth ryhmes..and I love the mention of the sage. cheers. The Sage
verry verry nicely corected. i like this poem so much more. wonderful job
A bride always wish for a happy and healthy life...past is a past and we are there to live anew with your lucky bride....10+++++++
very good poem for recitation as well.