Wednesday, August 6, 2014

A Bribe Of Nature Comments

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When the eyes talk and lips are sealed,
When your hand is in my hand,
And we walk together,
In a moonlit night,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 09 May 2017

It's a thoughtful poem, we are forced to think.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 07 September 2014

Excellent poem. My words are very much limited to express the feelings of your poems. You are a great poet.

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Amitava Sur 09 August 2014

Akhtar Vai - The way the cruelty dominates all over, I doubt whether we are safe! ! ! As I said in one of my poems (Humanity is at stake) This earth is not safe anymore, Here human cannot stay.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 August 2014

A Very Poignant write. Wars, bloodshed, inhuman treatment to women and children, Still they claim they are fighting for ideal. What for and whom for all this going on? Touching poem indeed.

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Valsa George 08 August 2014

The brutality that follows every war is so condemnable! There is not merely death and bloodshed, but also inhuman and barbaric treatment of women and children......! But everything is justified as a sacred cause or an ideal namely Freedom and Democracy! Unfortunately everyone is silent including God! A powerful poem reflecting your moral indignation!

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Salini Nair 08 August 2014

Thanks God we are humans, And not the angels, Deprived of this love, That is blended with pleasure..............sometimes we feel so......................

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