Wednesday, April 1, 2009

A Bribe For The One I Love Comments

Rating: 3.0

Ill buy you all the flowers in the world
And tell you I love you every day
If you would let me
And do the same for me.
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lilly mandrell
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Sameer Ahmed 08 April 2009

Very nice description of your efforts that you would probably do to acquire your adored one.......Such thoughts can only originate if one is pure and true from heart......You have shown loyality through this poem........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Aiden Florence 01 April 2009

Simple yet wonderful, still so deep and relaxing. What may have seemed like overrated, overused, melodramatic lines were well adjusted with a touch of uniqueness. Good job.

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