While walking through the fields
Along with you on no moon night
I never knew
I would be traveling all alone
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No day is same. Every day is a new day As bright as sun! Which is sure to come! ! ! a beautiful mask of smiles keeps us from woes and wiles. well done!
oday full moon night welcomed me With its delightful twilight What made me fear my own shadow I am not sure May be the loneliness of breeze Touched me painfully.......touching expression with a theme of pain. It is really a beautiful poem so nicely executed and shared amazingly.. Again thanks for sharing.10
A poignant write about life Sometimes in times of loneliness, hope springs. Wonderfully written with a meaningful message.10
Yes, we all crave the fellowship of human society. A universal need beautifully related, thank you Geetha
I didn't fear the shadow of mine being with you, Loneliness of breeze touched me painfully Deep pain and loneliness and the fear, well expresed
A great poem with deep meaning. togetherness of positive elements is not possible every time.
a poem of togetherness now gone only memories of a loved one? ..........wonderfully written.
Loneliness throws us into fear and uncertainty.Nature here is representing the narrator's own self.Magical effect it has created.Thanks for giving us the scope for reading this poem.
The same landmarks we happen to be while in happiness can bring in tears in a different situation. For example, a church. Where somebody got married, it can bring in happiness while seeing it but it can bring in tears on separation. Church doesn't change but our attitude has a different footing now. Good poem.
...loneliness of breeze touched me painfully.....so beautiful wordings this touched my heart. Well written.
The poem unfolds a minute study and the poet's grasp of certain relationships when passing through 'the tunnel of darkness' as against a time 'While being with you'. This is all very poignant. Thanks.
nicely penned...well arranged words..thematic expression....nice
So nicely envisioned and aptly presented. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.. ...10
Even in full moon, symbolic of fullness or surrounded by every thing, man some times feel lonely, that is the breeze of loneliness, the poet wants to speak about.Loneliness hurts.A great poem indeed with deep meaning.
Loneliness of the breeze and A breeze of loneliness how the gulf is in between the two, isnt it? yes, alone, left alone rather, tormenting seconds.......every known happiness it drills into and kills you....... nice subject.
The long lane of lonliness is here powerfully painted.
Beautiful mam, short of words...What made me fear my own shadow... awesome mam. Felt the pain! thanks for sharing mam. Thanks for your appreciation of my poem, MUSIC, Mam I would like you to read my latest poem, THE MAID'S DAUGHTER. Thanks for sharing mam.
Shadow an inseparable companion ever with us. At the same the reflection of shadows sometimes more than big of the actual human we are. We have to find and satisfy ourselves the loneliness one time or other to go with and a nice poetry.
Loved the concept of loneliness of breeze. A beautiful poem.