A Breath Without A Life Comments

Great truth spoken here, a broken heart could be healed by taking care of those in need. Thank you!

This piece of work is true, meaningful, believable, full of imagery, very creative indeed. Each line runs smoothly and flawless. Using simple words letting simple reader to understand what the author meant. I'll add to that: the author is talented. Well done!

Very nice and lovely poem.10 with love.

but when we love no more and heart's closed its door, We breath without a life so true... this is so good because it is so true and not everyone knows this.. its something to pass on to our kids... good job. Becca

Great Poem. Melvin your poem is as beautiful as your thought.

And if only we could convince even 1/3 of mortal earth, to exercise this as their life's mantra....what a far more peaceful world....we would pass to our children! Very fine work..ROCK-ON! fjr **

sharing love is sharing life and sharing life is breathing life...well said, Melvin...thanks for 'sharing'...10

true lines springing forth from the inner mines

truth of write to dare...thanks for sharing... Ency Bearis