Thursday, January 17, 2008

A Breath Of Spring Comments

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It was in the months of spring,
when blossoms bloom, and sparrows sing
when I first tasted her sweet lips
and knew the warmth of that first kiss
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Brian David Holmes
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John Nightingale 17 January 2008

Brilliant. Brought thoughts of dueling at dawn.

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Melvin Banggollay 17 January 2008

This poem is really good and it reminds me of a wonderul moment with my love one. thanks for sharing. Keep writing for you have the soul of a poet and a heart of a good dreamer who knows how to draw what is in his mind. best wishes, melvin

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Brian David Holmes

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