A Breath Of A Poem Comments

I love this. So you are a singer or lyricist! The imagery in this pithy piece is stunning. I like the idea of pulling from a river of unsung sungs, from the middle, not the beginning or the end. You have some talent!

I do believe you mean 'heart and mind in sync'; surely you are not flushing them down the sink. Very expressive poem though. Read mine - Sympathic Pain - Adeline

wow that's a good one i love it sooooo much where did you come up with the inspiration to write this amzaing poem i would love to know?

You beautifully present how you compose your poems...nice

This is EVERYTHING! ! You did this! !

No need to close just keep on singing and expressing. I like your work!