Saturday, January 3, 2015

A Breath Apart Comments

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The beginning and end are only a breath apart
From our eternal home
Our breath on loan
From our birth does roam
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Brian Kilpatrick
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Roseann Shawiak 02 July 2015

Such a poignant and soothing serenity flowing from your poem. Love the line - 'The beginning and end are only a breath apart from our eternal home'. You have dispersed a silent hope in this poem, that everyone will one day be reunited in God, and all sorrow will disappear then. Fantastically spiritual poem, a well and depth of meaning in it. So glad I came across your poetry, it is definitely a treasure chest of inspiration. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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