A Break Of Tradition Comments

Forthright expression of your feelings, well written. I am glad that you spend time creatively instead of letting family life challenges bog you down. You are strong and a purpose-driven person. Keep writing. You are destined to be great!

wonderful poem i love it so strong keep writing

Hey tiff..that's the paradox of family; they're too fami-liar with you 2 want to look wrinkle-free. That's supposd 2 show that they trust you enough to appreciate them the way they are. So now show them that you care, just so ur friends wudnt stumble upon their slack moments embarassing you as well. So you see ur mirror(eyes) shudnt b as unaesthetic as they may think, only hopeful(that's a lifetime task-the more committed you are the more piquant ur expectation) i'm still expecting ur comment on any of my poems. No matter how brief.

tiffany......i am glad you got started, and i am sure it is going to be better and better as you go! my best wishes for you!

family's always there but friends are spares cause when things go wrong then you see which on belongs a good friend is just to calm the nerves not everything we do on our own sometime we can use the help

You pick friends. Family is a burden or a blessing. As you get older you get to choose. Good luck.

hahaha... that's something!